While we are in a lock-down because of Covid-19, our tutors held game play over Microsoft Teams. I got great feed back where my tutors suggested things like that the video could’ve had texted to explain what the work is about and where the cuisine originates from, because if someone just watched the video they wouldn’t really understand the real motive behind the video and they would see the video as a simple food animation video and that’s it so that was something that was helpful. Also from my tutor i as given the advice how to clean up some of the rough patches in my illustration using Photoshop and the re-rendering the work, however I didn’t want to do this because I wanted to keep the rawness and the look that this was hand drawn, and not make it look to digital.