The second meeting was done over Zoom and I got some really good feedback.

I was told that the work “…blended in well with the slow moving animation and the calming sound track”, Sam class mate and that the  sound piece has completed the video. I was also told that I should’ve played with the camera angles in After Effects and I could’ve made the work have a little bit more motion then just having the actual art work moving. All of this is great feedback to take on bored for the future.

I have gotten 2 answers for my feedback, but they are important and also helpful for me to be more creative and explore further.

I like the response in this image to my questions especially question 3. The person has said to add pots and pan and I agree that would give more character and a different dimension to my work, could have them as a 3D model while the illustration is 2D.

The 2nd response I also very much enjoy, especially the response to question 3 and 4. I think the persona is right to say that i should’ve been more experimental with my Foley sounds and found different means to create them instead of recording the actual cooking sounds. I agree that some form of 3D aspect would’ve added another dimension and the use of camera would’ve gave a different outlook on my work, where it would’ve been more immersive. These feedback will be taken and used in my future projects.